Monday, March 16, 2015

Blog 3: "America"--Claude McKay



            The movement of the Harlem Renaissance brought about some very moving literary works, and really helped expose some of the issues that African Americans were facing at the time in America. I think Claude McKay’s poem, “America” is just one effective example of this. Through the use of language and emotion, McKay is able to create a piece that portrays these struggles, and I think these elements help make it relatable and relevant today to some readers.
            I think what makes McKay’s poem so interesting and effective, is the use and theme of emotion, and the confliction of emotions within it. For example, McKay talks of how he loves America, even though it imposes pain and hatred upon his daily life. McKay writes, “I love this cultured hell that tests my youth!” (McKay, 928).  These conflicting feelings help show the complex relationship that McKay and other African Americans had at the time, as they loved the country the lived in, even though they were exhausted by its racism and hatred, and yearning for better times, and better lives. The poem and speaker’s contrasting feelings of love and hate also help create the almost frustrated emotion within the poem, which also adds to the relationship between African Americans and America.
            The use of descriptive and metaphoric language also aids in McKay’s writing. I think a great example of this is when McKay writes, “Although she feeds me bread of bitterness, And sinks into my throat her tiger’s tooth,…” (McKay, 928). Lines such as these create interesting imagery, but also allow the reader/audience to interpret and understand the meaning through more fascinating and thought provoking language. By using these elements, McKay is further able to add to the feeling of the poem, and to the complex relationship African Americans had with America. Furthermore, it is effective in getting his audience to realize the severity of the problem, especially to those who suffer at the hands of such discrimination, etc.  
I think McKay’s poem can still be relevant/relatable to people and society today. The whole poem has such a confliction of feelings, as mentioned, but ultimately ends things on a rather bleak note. I think there are still race issues and injustices today that leave many people in society, looking on with a sort of feeling of injustice and hopelessness over the state of present things in society. With recent events, people are left questioning when things will ever get better. I think the last line of the poem sums up these sort of feelings and scenarios rather well as it states, “Like priceless treasures sinking in the sand” (McKay, 929). For this line gives off such a hopeless feeling, and perception of the future, and it gives off the idea that we will have to dig away at our troubles and issues if things get worse.

4 comments:

  1. I really liked this poem. I like how he is so torn between loving and hating America. I think the line " I love this cultured hell that tests my youth" really sums up his feelings pretty well about the country he lives in. He says he loves it but comparing it to hell shows a dislike for America. This is one of my favorite lines in the poem.

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  2. I enjoy this poem because he is so conflicted about his emotions. It is a realistic feeling that we all feel about many events and situations happening in out lives. He just decided to write a poem about his. I like how in his writing, well in my view, I can see his thoughts. As if, his poetry is him thinking out loud. Great Post!

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  3. There's such emotional tension in this poem, isn't there? And those analogies of bitter bread and tiger's tooth amp up this emotional tension, as you note.

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  4. There's such emotional tension in this poem, isn't there? And those analogies of bitter bread and tiger's tooth amp up this emotional tension, as you note.

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